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Memoirs Of The Condemned; My own writing section.
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Topic Started: January 17, 2014, 9:23 pm (954 Views)
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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January 17, 2014, 9:23 pm
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The First Victim
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Okay this is where I'll be putting any thing of my own creation. (Fic writings, poems etc). I guess I'll start with my(somewhat flawed) take on how Satoshi disappeared in chapter 3. (By the way, writing revolves solely around the CoPa universe).
Also everything that I write will be in a first person view of a character I came up with.(Shikeishu). (I'll explain his backstory later).
So without further adieu... Here go's nothing.
Spoiler: click to toggle I was stalking through the hallway just southeast of the Custodian's closet when I spotted a guy and a little girl walking towards a dead end.
The guy looked at the wall and cursed to himself, "Damn, a dead end".
He turned around towards the little girl who was holding herself. "It looks like its gonna take longer then I thought, there's nothing here". He somewhat explained to the little girl.
"But big brother?" She groaned.
"I'm sorry Yuka... you think you can hold it a little longer?" He asked her slightly sighing.
"Okay..." She spoke in a low tone while lowering her head.
Just when they were headed the other direction, an earthquake shook the school.
"Another earthquake! Hold on!" He screamed at the little girl, Yuka I think he said?
After the earthquake subsided, an opening to the second wing appeared.
"Are you okay, Yuka?" He asked in a concerned tone.
"I think so?" She said while rubbing her head".
"Hmm, a doorway appeared? This place is strange..." He muttered.
"I guess we can see if there's a bathroom in the next room" he said while looking down at Yuka.
"Are you ready". He asked.
She grabs his hand after standing back up."I'm ready, big brother". She answered.
I watched them walk through the double doors into the second wing.
"Hmm... This could be fun" I whispered to myself.
I passed through the doors after the boy and the girl walked through.
They were walking through the second set of doors across the outdoor hall.
I entered the second wing, following close by.
I sank into the shadows when I noticed them grabbing their heads in pain due to the dense air.
"Big brother! My head hurts!" She screamed.
"Yeah, mine too" he groaned.
"The air is heavier in here... Why is that?" He thought out loud.
"Big brother... Yuka still has to go!". She whimpered.
"R-Right, lets go see if there's a working restroom" he stuttered.
They started walking towards the stairwell.
I followed close behind, I stopped just before the last step to the second floor when I heard the guy yell at someone down the hall.
I peeked closer to see who it was. ... Not that it mattered to me.
It was just some girl, probably from another school.
"Hey, your alive, we're Alive too!" He shouted with enlightenment.
"My name is Mochida, Satoshi, don't be afraid!" He shouted trying to reason with her.
The first thing I noticed when she turned around was... If I could describe what I saw. It's like the hamsters in her head was going through a seizure.
Yuka cliched onto Satoshi's pants in fear.
He tried to reach for the girl when she shoved him to the ground with Yuka still holding on to him.
"You're not real! You're not real!" She kept shouting.
The girl turned around and started running the other direction.
Yuka tried helping her brother up.
At this point, I started growing impatient.
But instead of Trying to kill them then and there.
I decided to move forward into the second floor. ... Maybe find 'Hamster Girl'.
I ended up in the second floor.
I passed in front of a door that was covered in talismans.
...A room even I couldn't enter.
After seeing no sign of "nuts n' bolts".
I got bored and decided To go upstairs.
When I got there, I hid in the shadows when I noticed some guy strolling along the third floor.
I turned away quickly when I noticed his uniform was somewhat similar to Satoshi's except he was wearing a blazer and a pair of glasses.
Practically bored to tears, I went back downstairs to the first floor.
Then a mixed feeling of joy and rage surged through me when I seen Satoshi standing in front of the door going back to the first wing.
He was playing with his phone when I went behind him.
He put his phone back into his pocket and turned around when I grabbed his shoulder.
Without hesitation, I punched him in the face, knocking him out.
"I'm going to take special pleasure in this". I said while grinding my teeth.
I pulled out my knife and was about to slash him to pieces when suddenly Sachiko showed up.
"Shikeishu!?... What are you doing?" She questioned.
"What does it look like I'm doing? I'm about to turn this boring waste of food into confetti!" I shouted while clinching the knife.
"This guy isn't worth your time" she said solemnly.
"But you don't understand what I've been through... God, I just want to taste blood again" I said on the verge of tears.
"Oh quit having a temper tantrum you big baby" she said while mocking me.
"Why do you want to save this guy? Why?!" I shouted in confusion.
"Because one pathetic soul isn't worth wasting... Much less a sleeping one" she explained.
"Since when do you think like that?" I asked harshly.
"And besides, I was the one who knocked out the fu..." Cut off mid sentence when we heard Yuka scream from outside.
"No time to talk... Lets take your punching bag to another room" she told me in a straightforward tone.
I just picked up his body and me and Sachiko teleported to a hallway in the first wing.
"What do you want to do with him?" Sachiko asked.
"I don't care... Just get him out of my sight..." I said with a depressed tone.
"Fair enough..." She said while opening a door to the staff room.
We toss his unconscious body into the room and locked it.
"So anyway, we have some new arrivals come in... I want you to "greet them". She said while grinning as usual.
"Yeah whatever... I'll go check it out..." I said while still depressed.
"I've been meaning to ask... Were you there the whole time or?..." I questioned.
"Oh I was just passing through just after watching a guy cut down "Hamster Girl" as you called her". She said while snickering.
"You heard my thoughts?" I asked while surprised.
"You think out loud" she said bluntly.
"Oh... I've gotta work on that" I recollected.
"Okay... I guess I'll get going" I said blankly.
And thats pretty much it, just to note, I wrote everything in one afternoon (and I didn't think this through). Criticize or whatever, it's fine by me.
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"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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January 21, 2014, 6:45 am
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The First Victim
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Okay, this one by the way is the actual first fic that I wrote. I'm guessing there's some confusion for "what's my characters relation to Sachiko". Well here's the explanation. (Writers note: I do not use proper Japanese honorifics).
Spoiler: click to toggle Memoirs Of The Condemned. It was seven in the evening,
I was wandering along the school hallways as I would normally do when I passed in front of classroom 2-9.
I heard a voice of a girl say in a cold demeanor, "It was a rainy night, just like this one".
I saw the lights at the doorway go out.
Suddenly curiosity got the best of me and I walked into the room from the shadows.
I noticed seven kids were sitting around a candlelight in the dark.
The girl who was sitting in front of the chalkboard was telling the story.
...A story that was all too familiar to me.
Before I knew it, I found myself standing against the wall, Listening to her story.
It was like I was in a trance, I was hanging on to every word.
Some of the students were shivering but it was subtle.
However, one of them was so frightened, they shrieked and jumped onto another student.
...it was okay but it wasn't that scary. I cringed a few times when one of them would pipe up during the story.
A lot of them started looking around when I muttered, "just let her finish the story".
She looked at their reactions and grinned... she then continued.
After the story was done, one of them turned on the lights and they started cleaning the classroom.
As the light was switched on, I quickly sunk into the shadows.
I lost interest after a while and slipped through the floor and went about my business.
I have to admit though, She definitely painted a picture.
But there was one detail she left out.
...that there was a third victim in this story.
My name is Shikeishū and this story is about how the end is just the beginning.
Prologue
A friend of mine's mother worked as a nurse for tenjin elementary.
Around seven pm when school hours were done, Miss Shinozaki would stay after school to take notes and prepare all of the medical supplies for the next day.
On stormy nights. Her daughter , Sachiko Shinozaki, always stood by the second floor window to watch the rain while her mother was finishing her rounds.
I didn't like the rain at all, I always thought something bad would happen during storms.
Still... I stayed after hours to accompany her since we both had to take the train to go home.
It was less expensive on us that way.
My parents didn't mind when I stayed a bit longer.
They knew I was in safe hands for the most part anyway.
We've known the Shinozaki's since I was very little, so they were like family to us.
But unfortunately. That night would take a complete turn for the worst.
I was putting away some books in my locker when I was startled by a lightning strike that caused the power to shut down.
After the thunder, there was a faint cracking noise that followed, but there was no lightning at first.
I was curious about the sudden noise but due to the bad weather, I just assumed it was thunder.
I was headed towards the main door to wait for miss Shinozaki and "sachi" as I would normally do,
When not long after the strange sound, I heard a high pitched scream from a little girl.
I panicked when I remembered that there were only four people in the school at the time and the only little girl here was sachiko.
I ran towards the direction of the scream. When I found her, She was kneeling in front of her mother.
Astounded by the horrific sight when I realized that her body was mangled and her neck was twisted in a strange position.
I just stood there in shock I didn't know whether she slipped and fell due to the darkness,
Watching my friend crying for her mother. Completely terrified by the turn of events. Miss Shinozaki was like an aunt to me. Seeing her in this horrific scene, ... I was petrified.
As when I started sobbing, I looked up to see principle Takamine Yanagihori running down the stairs in a panicking haste.
I thought he was coming to help but the first thing he did was grab sachi and he started strangling her.
I couldn't believe what I was witnessing, The most humble person I knew was killing my friend.
Without second thought, I rushed to pull him off of her but I wasn't strong enough, I was too small.
He turned to look at me while choking sachi, there was sweat running down his face repulsively.
He just continued, I completely fell apart inside when I saw her eyes roll in the back of her head then there was a horrid smell when she voided her bowls.
I felt so useless, I failed to save my only friend. And I was unaware of what happened to Miss Shinozaki.
While I was processing everything that just happened in front of me. My thoughts had come to a complete stop and the next thing I knew.... I'm gasping for breath.
Principle Yanagihori had his hands around my neck. I tried to pull his hands off of me but he was much stronger than me. I could literally feel my lungs collapsing.
As everything was fading to black, I looked behind me to see Miss Shinozaki's body facing the wall and her head was facing towards me.
Turning my head to look behind the principle to see Sachi's lifeless body as well. Saliva was dripping from her mouth.
Now looking up to the person we all trusted once before. Looking into his eyes, Odd enough, There was fear in his eyes. That was the last thing I remember seeing before I submitted to the inevitable. Fear....until.
To be continued.
Chapter one. Abyssal Awakening.
Moments later I wake up in a daze.
"Ugh... W-What happened? Was it all just a dream? I don't remember falling asleep?" I groaned to myself.
Looking around the room. I noticed that I was still in tenjin. And to make things worse. It was pitch black with only small amounts of illumination from window light.
Still tired. I pick up my hands to rub my eyes when I was surprised by a strange imagery... My hand were 'transparent'.
"My...hands... Are...what?" I said while shivering.
Jumping up from where I was sitting, I look down behind me. When I was stricken with fear when I noticed a horrific realization " is that a body? That's ... My body?!" I shouted in confusion.
Suddenly I heard footsteps coming from the halls.
Panicking, My first reaction was to hide in the closest classroom.
I reach for the sliding door when my hand passes straight through the door.
No second thought, I pass through the door like there was nothing was in my way.
Peeking through the door from the other side, I see a tall silhouette picking up my body then running off in a haste.
"Where is that guy going with my... Body? "whispering to myself.
Following the figure as quietly as possible, I hid behind a corner when he stopped in front of a set of doors then started looking around to make sure nobody was following him.
The man opened the doors and ran in then quickly closed the doors behind him.
Leaving my hiding spot to run to the doors,
Assuming from my last trial with a door. I pass through the doors to find a set of stairs leading down to what looked liked a bomb shelter.
This place was old, I had a strange feeling from these creepy underground hallways,
Regardless. I persisted through the dark corridors to find my body.
After much wandering through the darkness, I felt discouraged to see that I had lost track of the man who took my body.
I was close to forfeiting until I saw a glimpse of light at the end of the tunnel.
Walking closer towards the light, I could hear what sounded like a saw moving back and forth through a piece of meat coming from the room with the light.
Finally coming to the room, I walk through the door to see the man with a flashlight in front of a table.
I stepped closer to see what was on the table, Trying to be quiet,
Looking closer to see what was on the table. I couldn't see the man's face, despite having some light from the flashlight. I could barely see what exactly this thing was he was working on.
I was just tall enough to be able to see over the table from a safe distance. He shined the light on a better area for me to see what it was.
And to my surprise, I took a step backwards when I realized I had found my body.
But that wasn't the only thing I found out. It wasn't just my body on the table.
Reality then hit like a stone when I saw Miss Shinozaki and Sachi's bodies as well.
I took a few steps backwards then stopped to realize what had happened.
That's when I remembered seeing Miss Shinozaki's body on the floor in front of the stairs.
Sachi being strangled to death then my own demise.
"It wasn't a dream then? Did I really die?" I muttered.
"Yes, we're dead!"
I jumped when I heard a voice of a little girl coming from behind me.
I turned around towards the direction of the voice to see someone I didn't expect...Sachiko.
She was sitting on the floor with her legs across her chest.
I walked towards her then kneeled in front of her.
"Sachi, I'm glad to see you, are you okay?" I said to her a surprised tone.
She glared at me for a moment. "Does it look like I'm okay to you?! Didn't I just say that we're dead?!" She shouted at me.
I stepped back when she yelled at me,
I turned around quickly to make sure the man wasn't behind me after sachiko's shouting.
"It doesn't matter if I scream, He can't see or hear us anyway" she said to me when I turned my head around to see if he had heard us.
Turning back towards her.
"So... it wasn't a dream then, We're dead and that's our bodies on the table?" I asked with suspicion.
So that means the man who took our bodies is..."cut off mid sentence.
"Takamine Yanagihori"she said in a growling tone.
She startled me for a second when she called the principle by his given name, instead of his surname.
I turned around when I noticed the sawing motions had stopped.
Looking towards the principle to see him putting some dismembered limbs in some buckets he had lying around in the room.
After watching him put the body parts in the buckets.
A surge of rage grew inside of me when I saw my head in one of the blood filled buckets.
Not long after disposing of my limbs. He then pulled out Sachi's tongue but left her body intact.
He Put the tongue in a burlap bag then threw her body in a hole he apparently had dug out before I entered the room.
"That bastard will pay for what he's done to us and mommy" Sachiko said while grinding her teeth .
"I agree... but what can we do? He can't see or hear us? I said in frustration.
Noticing while we were talking, The principle had started looking around like he heard something or someone.
"Can he really hear us? He just turned towards us?" I asked while lowering my voice.
"I don't care if he can hear us" Sachiko said blatantly.
"All I know is that I want to watch him drown in his own blood" she said in rage.
Even though I was upset as well about watching our bodies being desecrated and tossed aside.
I've never seen Sachi this angry before. ... She actually frightened me.
I knew she was livid towards the principle, so was I, but it was like she had become a different person.
Apparently due to the noises,the principle was hearing.
He panicked and picked up Miss Shinozaki's corpse then quickly left the room.
Sachi watched him run out of the room.
She clenched her fist and stood up to go after him but I grabbed her arm to try to stop her.
"Let go of me you worthless bastard!" She yelled.
"Going after the principle to watch him tear your mother apart isn't going to help anything... I know you're angry, I am too, but if we're going to do something about it, We've gotta have patience if we're gonna try to kill him." I said trying to reason with her.
I stopped for a moment to think about what I just said. "Did I just say that I wanted to kill the principle?" I thought to myself.
She glared at me while grinding her teeth until she sighed and lowered her head.
"What do you suppose we should do then?" She said slightly calm.
I let go of arm when she calmed down. "I'm not sure, really" I wondered. "I guess we can try to pick something up?" I asked.
"That's your idea? Just pick something up?" She questioned.
"Got any better ideas then?" I remarked.
She sighed and watched me go for one of the buckets, Picking it up, slightly struggling.
"It's a little heavy, but I can lift it, at least" I said with assurance.
"Okay... ill try" she said solemnly.
She stands in front of another bucket and lifts it.
"Alright then, we can still pick up objects, so... do we have any plans?" I asked.
There was silence for a moment until a smile creeped on Sachiko's face.
"...I have one plan" she said in a strange tone.
"Okay... what do you have? How are we going to kill him?" I asked eagerly.
"We're not going to kill him, ... he's going to kill himself" She said while grinning.
"Okay?... How are we gonna get him to kill himself?" I asked in confusion.
"Simple, we're going to tear the school apart" She said with content.
"What do you mean by 'tear the school apart,?" I wondered.
"We're going to destroy the school's reputation" she said in a darker tone.
"Hmm... okay but how are we gonna destroy its reputation?" I asked curiously.
I don't remember how long we stayed in that dark tunnel and just discussed what we were gonna do to destroy the schools career.
She came up with some grotesque ideas and I chimed in and threw in my own thoughts on what we can do.
Despite the kind of horrid thoughts we were creating. ...I actually felt nostalgic.
Like we were just little kids dreaming big dreams again.
I didn't even acknowledge the thought of my parents being worried for me, Possibly looking for me.
The only thing I was thankful for was that I wasn't alone.
As selfish as it sounds. I was glad I wasn't alone in this school.
I have to say though, I may be dead, but at least I'm with a close friend. Sachiko Shinozaki.
...To be continued.
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"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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January 23, 2014, 9:20 pm
Post #3
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The First Victim
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Alright, here's another short one. This time I'm trying out writing in third person view.(I think I might keep this writing style... Easier to depict and less narcissist). This one takes place after the ghost children are appeased and the nexus breaks down. Heads up, this one is cannon to the Blood Covered story.
Spoiler: click to toggle Shortly after the massive earthquake that desecrated the school's nexus.
Shikeishu:"what happened around here?" He thought to himself.
He stumbled through the hallways in the second wing until he came across the stairwell to the second floor.
Shikeishu:"this place really went to hell... How ironic?" He thought to himself.
When Shikeishu started walking up the stairs, he heard someone talking upstairs.
As he got closer to the voice, he somewhat recognized the person talking to himself.
Shikeishu;"Hmm... Who do we have here?" He thought to himself.
Morishige:"Please Mayu... I just need to see you again... I need to hear your voice..."
He noticed on the way up the stairs, Shikeishu looked up to see Sachi sitting above the rafters with her hands held together.
She was covered in a ghostly visage so she couldn't be seen or heard from mortals.
Shikeishu:"Hey Sachi... What are you doing here?" He asked as he changed forms and flew to her.
Sachiko:"W-What?... Oh... Hey Shikeishu" she said while being startled.
Shikeishu:"Was I interrupting something?" asking sarcastically.
Sachiko:"N-No... I was just..." She struggled with her sentence.
Shikeishu:"Wait, were you just staring at this guy?" he asked while scratching his head.
Sachiko: "No!... She shouted defensively.
Shikeishu: "Wait a minute?... You were staring at him?" he said in a surprised tone.
Sachiko: "i was not!" Shouting defensively again.
Shikeishu: "okay, no need to get defensive, sheesh" he said after floating backwards with his hands up.
Shikeishu: "But why are you in here with this guy?, so what makes him so special?" Battering her with questions.
Sachiko: "it's just that he... It's just I umm..." Choking on her own words.
Shikeishu: "wait, I think I figured out why you're hanging around him and why you're so nervous... You like him, don't you?" Smirking at her.
Sachiko: "what?" Her cheeks then started blushing.
Shikeishu: "oh look at that, you're blushing... How does a ghost blush anyway?" He questioned while pointing his finger in her face.
Grabbing his hand. Sachiko: "get your hand out of my face"
He takes his hand away and frowns.
Shikeishu:" Well, bite my head off, why don't you?". He said sarcastically.
Sachiko: "Sigh'... You wouldn't understand". She said while lowering her head.
Shikeishu:" Actually I do understand... There was this one girl I liked, but it wouldn't have worked out for me anyway... For one thing... I think the only way she would've found me appealing as if i was a girl... And her sibling". He reasoned while thinking back.
Sachiko:" I guess that makes sense?" She answered, somewhat confused.
Shikeishu:" but still... one thing I don't understand is that you're lusting after a guy who's twice you're age, or more like you're three times his age" he remarked in a condescending tone.
Sachiko:" That's not the point... He just... There's something about him... I'll admit it... I like him, okay?". She said nervously while playing with her thumbs.
Shikeishu:"Honestly, I've never seen you this nervous around a boy before... Except for when you were around our sensei before we died". He remarked while reminiscing.
Sachiko went back to staring at Morishige when Shikeishu noticed her clinching her fist.
Shikeishu:"What's wrong, Sachi?... Wait, who's that?". He said after looking down.
Mayu Suzumoto approached Morishige in a spectral form, looking down at him.
Mayu:"why Shige-Nii? What has driven you to this? She whispered while watching her friend fantasizing about his pictures.
She looks over his shoulder to see the one picture he was commenting about the most, and to her disgust... It was the picture of her.
Sachiko and Shikeishu notices her reaching for Morishige's cell phone.
Shikeishu covered his mouth to hide his grin from Sachiko.
Mayu: "... Don't look... Don't look at me" she said after touching his phone.
Morishige raised his phone to his ear in confusion.
Morishige:"Mayu?... Is that you? He spoke into the phone while trembling.
Mayu:"...Don't look...At my insides..." She spoke, still connected to his phone.
Morishige:"M-Mayu?" He said while his hand is shaking.
Mayu:"...Don't look at me... Shige-Nii" she screamed into the phone.
In a psychotic rage, Morishige threw his cell phone and began screaming and laughing, smashing his face against the wall.
Sachiko went to intervene when Shikeishu grabbed her arm and smiled at her.
In the background, Mayu's can still be heard from Morishige's cell phone.
Mayu:"...Stop, Shige-Nii, ...please...I'm... Sorry... " she screamed while crying.
Morishige then charges towards the second story window in the stairwell.
Sachiko broke from Shikeishu's grip and charge after Morishige... Only to see him break through the glass and fall to his death.
Mayu was down the first stairwell,in the corner, crying.
Sachiko landed on the ground staring at the wall.
Shikeishu:" Looks like your boyfriend couldn't fly, could he?" He screamed while laughing.
Sachiko: ....
Shikeishu:" What's the matter, Sachi?... You should be happy, you two finally have something in common!" He shouted while still laughing.
Sachiko just walked down the stairs to the first floor, passing by Mayu.
Shikeishu:"Where are you going?... His corpse is outside!" He mocked her grief.
Sachiko:".... If you weren't already dead..." She whispered to herself and disappeared.
The end.
and there you have it... Which one is more cruel? Ridicule or whatever, by the way, I wrote this in an hour.
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"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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January 29, 2014, 1:38 pm
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The First Victim
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Okay, here's another one. This one's actually an old one. Once again it's gonna be in third person view because I like this writing format better. I burrowed some elements from the BoS manga but the end result is completely different. And if you're wondering what inspired my character? ... Well do you remember that eyeball at the beginning of the game? Shikeishu is basically the camera and my fics are commentary that I came up with after watching the game and reading the manga.
So there's that and here we go.
Spoiler: click to toggle He was moving through the hallway coming south towards the main hall when He heard a scream coming from the infirmary.
He rushed to the wall just before taking a right turn into the main hallway.
He changed into human form and peeked around the corner to see the door catching on fire then pried opened by a girl with short hair.
He watched her cough excessively as Yoshie Shinozaki growled " IM GOING TO KILL YOU".
Shikeishu:"So it appears one of them went into the infirmary... And met Ms Shinozaki."he noticed while peeking around the corner.
Shikeishu:"I'll admit, she's pretty tough to be able to escape her,"he whispered to himself.
He was about to step around the corner to "greet her" when someone shouted "Naomi!" Then ran to the other girls side.
The girl with the short hair stopped coughing long enough to shout back "Seiko!".
He stayed behind the corner to examine the situation.
He wasn't close enough to listen to what they were saying to each other.
He could see the girl with the hair curls checking on her friend but He was too far away to listen clearly.
He was getting bored watching them talk, He started to change back into wraith form and move into the hallway when the short haired one changed her tone.
Naomi:"You left me behind!" She shouted angrily.
Seiko:"I...I'm sorry okay? I'm so sorry, I was looking for Yuka-chan" the other one pleaded.
Naomi:"But you didn't find her, didn't you... god I can't believe this!" She screamed in rage.
Shikeishu:"Oh?... What's happening now?" He wondered as he stayed hidden behind the corner.
Shikeishu:"This should be interesting?" He whispered curiously.
He just listened and watched around the corner.
To him... it was like listening to an opera.
Shikeishu:"The enraged one is resonating with the blackening, this is perfect" he said to himself with delight.
He was enjoying the 'conversation' intently until the other one said something that erased his smile.
Seiko:"You're wrong, Naomi, you can never be a burden to your family" She shouted back. Seiko:"Family will always care for their loved ones, your mother will always remember you."she to reason with Naomi.
Seiko:."I don't know how to verbalize it well... but all I know is you can never be a burden to your mother and you'll never be forgotten" she tried reasoning with her friend.
For a moment, it seemed like time had frozen still to him.
Those last words echoed through his mind like a bell ringing repeatedly.
Two words were especially drilled into his brain.
Shikeishu:"Family?... Mother? ...Oh my god, I've completely forgotten about my family?" He said to himself while facing forward with his back sliding down the wall.
Shikeishu:"How can this be?... How can I forget my own mother?" He questioned angrily.
Shikeishu:"It's been fifty years and I never once thought of her, what have I become? What kind of son am I?" He kept asking.
Shikeishu:"My parents could've been looking for me, but they can never find me... They probably don't even know I'm dead, they must be stricken with grief" He cried with regret.
Shikeishu:"All because of that bastard, Yanagihori" He said in anger while clinching his fist.
Before He knew it, He was leaning against the wall crying. Shikeishu:"...Mama.... mama where are you?" He said while crying.
It seemed like time went back to its regular flow to him.
Naomi:"Oh don't start spouting out that bullshit!" One of them shouted.
Shikeishu:"P-Please... don't yell... at mama, please don't... yell at her, she's done nothing wrong!" He shouted' still in a state of regression.
Seiko:"Hold on, Naomi, I think I hear someone crying" she said trying to listen to the cries.
Naomi:"Oh don't start making shit..." Her sentence was cut off when Seiko shouted back at her.
Seiko:."Will you just shut up for a minute, I seriously hear someone crying, they may need our help!". Seiko shouted at Naomi while turning towards the direction of the sobbing.
Naomi just stood there stunned and confused.
While he was crying for his mother, He started feeling a tap on his shoulder.
He looked up to see one of the girls in the hallway earlier.
Shikeishu:."M...Mama?" He said in confusion.
Seiko:"Hey there, ...why are you crying? Are you lost? She asked in a worried tone.
Shikeishu:"I miss my mama" He said while sobbing.
Seiko"How did you get here?"she asked while kneeling on one leg to be eye level with him.
Shikeishu:"I...don't know" He said while still sobbing and confused.
Seiko:"Well my name is Shinohara, Seiko, what's your name? She asked curiously.
Shikeishu:"S-Shikeishū, Hisan" He said while clearing his eyes.
Seiko:"Nice to meet you, Shikeishū. This is Nakashima, Naomi" Seiko said after looking behind herself.
Shikeishu:"It's nice to meet you too,... I'm sorry for crying, it's not like me to do this" He said while rubbing his eyes.
Seiko:"It's okay to cry sometimes". She said before placing her hand on his shoulder.
Shikeishu:"It's just... I miss my mother so much, I haven't seen her in a long time, I had completely forgotten about her" He said in a somber tone.
Just when He was about to start crying again... Seiko's arm were around him.
He couldn't help but hug her back.
Seiko:"There, there Shikeishū, it'll be alright...Y,know you remind me of my little brother, I think you two would make great friends" she said when she pulled back to smile at him.
Shikeishu:"Thank you, Shinohara" He said after wiping his eyes again.
After a moment of silence, Naomi then spoke up.
Naomi:"Seiko... I'm sorry for yelling at you... it wasn't your fault, I was just scared and there were so many emotions building up, I couldn't control myself... I'm sorry" Naomi said while her voice is still strained.
Seiko stands up and hugs Naomi.
Seiko:."I'm sorry too, Naomi... Now lets try to find a way out of here, fast... I still have that salon appointment, remember?" She said cheerfully.
Seiko:"Hey, Shikeishū, you wanna come with us to see if we can find a way out of here?" Seiko asked after turning towards Shikeishu.
He couldn't help but smile.
Shikeishu:"Thank you for the offer but I have to find my own way out too ... I'm looking for my sister, she's lost somewhere in the school, I have to make sure she's okay." He explained to her.
Seiko:."Really? Are you going to be safe by yourself?" She asked in a worried tone.
Shikeishu:"Yeah I think so, I should be fine, I'm gonna go my own way, it was nice meeting the both of you" He said cheerfully.
Seiko:"Okay... I guess this is goodbye then" she said somewhat sad.
Shikeishu:."I guess so, please be safe" he said to them both.
Naomi:"We will, you take care as well and it was nice meeting you too" Naomi said to him with her voice still strained.
Seiko:."I hope you find your sister soon so you two can get out of here together... Right Naomi?"Seiko said in a up beat tone.
Naomi:"Right... now lets go find our friends so we can do the same" Naomi said while smiling.
Naomi and Seiko:"Goodbye, Shikeishū" they both said while walking away.
Seiko:"I guess we better start by searching for Mochida and them... C'mon Naomi"she said while pulling on her arm.
He was watching them walk in the darkness, holding on to each other Then He thought to himself.
Shikeishu:"It's strange... I've only known them for a short time and I've already grown attached to them." He thought to himself.
Shikeishu:"I actually liked both of them, especially Shinohara." Still thinking to himself after pulling out his knife.
Shikeishu:"...That's why I'm gonna take special pleasure in tearing them apart, piece by piece. ...watching them drown in their own blood and spilling their guts across the halls." He thought to himself when passing his fingers across the blade.
Shikeishu:"That's when they will truly become...beautiful". He thought to himself while grinning.
He stood up, looking at the knife one more time and followed them...
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"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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January 31, 2014, 1:26 pm
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The First Victim
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For today, I'm not gonna post a feeble fan fiction. Instead, I'm gonna post my personal playlist, I came up with when I first watched the gameplay. Due to the playthrough I watched in June, the original soundtrack was absent from the game. To this day, I still don't know what the original songs sound like. So I thought up a playlist that depicts each scene at the best of my memory.
To get this out of the way, I think Corpse Party is one of the most metal games i've ever seen. The reason why I'm not posting this on the Music Thread is because of two things.
1. It would take six months straight of just posting on the Music Thread. 2. I'm not gonna leave a YouTube link on each track.
Since this is gonna take up too much space, I'm gonna leave the playlist under a spoiler tag. So without further adieu, here's Yoshie's Playlist.
Spoiler: click to toggle Prologue South Of Heaven by Slayer.1988 (I've replaced the opening song with something much more cryptic).
Hell Awaits by Slayer.1985 (when they tear apart the charm and all hell breaks loose).
Chapter 1 Spirit In Black by Slayer.1990 (when Naomi and Seiko awaken inside the school).
Eyes Of Wrath by Testament.1999 (their first encounter with a spirit).
Mutilation by Death.1987 (walking down the hallway and finding the destroyed body).
Black Sabbath by Black Sabbath.1970 (when Naomi encounters "Yours Truly").
The Philosopher by Death.1993 (after escaping the infirmary and then comes the pivotal scene, this song is on Naomi's perspective).
Rapturous Grief by Gorguts.1998 (the first official death in the game).
Chapter 2 Symbolic by Death.1995 (The first memory of Seiko and Naomi, picking up the gym equipment).
The Haunting by Testament.1987 (when Ms Yui go's on her own).
Condemned To Obscurity by Gorguts.1993 (when Ms Yui encounters the Yokohama).
Catatonic by slayer.2006 (when Ayumi and Yoshiki go searching for the others).
Souls Of Black by Testament.1990 (when they encounter the flurry of corpses).
True Believer by Testament.1999 (When Ayumi becomes possessed for the first time).
Shoot Me Again by Metallica.2003 (Yoshiki's flashback to when he was being scolded by his gym teacher).
Silent Scream by Slayer.1988 (Ayumi becomes possessed again).
Low Man's Lyric by Metallica.1997 (Ayumi and Yoshiki meet Naho, soon after, finding the pieces of Yoshikazu's doll).
Dis incarnated by Gorguts.1991 (when Mayu is killed by Yuki and Tokiko).
Hammer Smashed Face by Cannibal Corpse.1993 (when Ayumi runs away and Yoshikazu drags Yoshiki away).
Chapter 3 A Moment Of Clarity by Death.1998 (Naomi succumbs to grief)
Welcome Home. (Sanatarium) by Metallica.1986 (Satoshi and Yuka's introduction to the school).
Raging Waters by Testament.1987 (this one is just a tongue and cheek humor).
Invisible Kid by Metallica.2003 (when the Mochida's meet up with Morishige).
The Frayed Ends Of Sanity by Metallica.1988 (the Mochida's first encounter with Mitsuki Yamamoto).
Death's Head by Slayer.1998 (Yuka's encounter with Yuki Kanno).
Tormentor by Slayer.1983 (when Yuka is being chased by Morishige).
Hero Of The Day by Metallica.1996 (when Yuka meets Kizami).
Suicide Machine by Death.1991 (when Yuka, Kizami and Kurosaki open the bathroom door, covered in talismans).
Needled 24/7 by Children Of Bodom.2003 (When Kizami stabs Kurosaki).
I changed a few things and added some songs.
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"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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February 2, 2014, 4:58 pm
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The First Victim
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Getting back on track with some writing I've done a few months ago. For the actual chapters,they're going to remain in first person view as opposed to the side things. The reason why I write these in first person view is because its supposed to be memories.(but I'm sure you already knew this). So anyway, here's chapter two.
Spoiler: click to toggle Chapter Two Sins Of The Father.
Nearly twenty years have passed since the night of our demise.
We've learned a few things during our time of 'dormancy'.
We learned how to return to human form to blend in with the rest of the crowd.
We waited anxiously for the right time for our vengeance to begin.
Honestly, the timing couldn't have been better.
PrincipleYanagihori's son Yoshikazu Yanagihori had become a teacher for Tenjin Elementary.
From what I've seen of him. He was a warm hearted, Caring person.
He always paid attention to his students, and he had practically infinite patience.
...I actually liked the guy, So to speak.
Sadly, Sachi didn't see it that way. She only looked at him like she looked at the principle. ...with sheer, unrelenting hatred.
I remember when we were sitting down in the tunnels.
Sachi told me that she didn't just want the principle to pay for what he's done.
... She wanted to watch his entire bloodline burn.
My anger was directed towards principle Yanagihori, and no one else.
Sachiko was more intent for revenge compared to me.
Honestly, I think Yoshikazu has taken more punishment than his father ever has.
I'll admit, Sachiko was cruel. Punishing someone for being related to the man who killed us without second thought.
Unfortunately for Yoshikazu. After two years of him teaching some classes.
Sachi and I would watch him from the shadows.
We noticed that he started suffering from some kind of rare mental disease.
It rendered his ability to speak in proper sentences.
He started writing some strange drawings, which were too difficult to comprehend. Along with some erratic mental breakdowns. The school seen him as a liability and a danger to the students. ... Thus terminating his career as a teacher.
I remember looking over at sachi when he drew the scribblings on the chalk board and she would just smile...a very demented smile at that.
She looked over to me. Sachiko:"Hey Shikeishu, I have an idea for him" she said while giggling.
Shikeishu:"Okay?... what is it?" asking nervously.
We left the classroom through the wall then she explained to me about manipulating the borderline mindless teacher to take the blame for the murders that would occur.
I was astounded by her idea. But I thought to myself. Shikeishu:"Of all people to use as a scapegoat for such a heinous crime. The kind and trustworthy school teacher".
"...It was perfect". I noted to myself.
Shikeishu:"Okay since you have this worked out, did you have any victims in mind?" I Asked anxiously.
Sachiko:"Well I have two in my sights but we need one more". She said while thinking.
Sachiko:"I know for sure for this to work, we need four victims at the crime scene" she thought out loud.
Shikeishu:"Oh okay... Wait, you said we needed three victims earlier ... Why four?" I questioned.
Sachiko:"Because I need to make sure the plan go's smoothly...that's why I'm gonna pretend to be captured...okay?" She said bluntly.
Shikeishu:"Well I guess that makes since, so what am I gonna do while your playing "damsel in distress". I said sarcastically.
Sachiko:"You're gonna stand outside and wait, when you can hear only one of them screaming, call the police ."she explained.
Shikeishu:"Okay then, I'm on board now, so when are we gonna go through with the plan?" I asked eagerly.
Sachiko:"At around seven o' clock". She said while looking towards the bomb shelter doors.
Shikeishu:"Sounds good to me, so what about capturing our victim's and where are we gonna bring them?" I asked while playing with my fingers.
Sachiko:"I'm going to bring them to the same place where we died and you leave the first two to me, I'll make sure they're 'prepared', you try to find the third kill" she said while walking away.
Sachi then left me alone to figure this one out myself.
Shikeishu:"Okay then, it can't be that hard to bring a lamb to the slaughter" I said to myself while walking the other direction.
The last time I saw sachi before the murders, we were standing by the shoe racks at the main entrance at three thirty six.
There were students who stayed after school hours, waiting for their parent's to pick them up.
I was wandering the halls just southeast of the custodian's closet at around six o' clock when I heard some very feint, mumbling sounds coming from outside the second wing entrance.
As I walked closer to the second wing, I could hear the sound much clearer, it was definitely a child's voice.
I peeked through the door just enough to see when I noticed Yoshikazu sitting down outside.
I couldn't see who he was listening to but I knew it was the voice of a little girl.
Apparently, she was watching the rain when Yoshikazu approached her and sat down next to her and started listening to her story.
Shikeishu:"This is perfect, I didn't have to waste my time searching for a victim when the 'culprit' has found her for me" I thought to myself.
Shikeishu:"But how do I get him to cart her off?" Still thinking to myself.
Shikeishu:"Hmm... You know what, I want to try something" I whispered.
I passed through the door then without hesitation, I entered Yoshikazu's body.
I could feel him grabbing his head, He was thrashing around, trying to scream when I finally took full control of his body.
"Are you okay, sensei?" The girl kept saying.
I remember looking down at the girl when she was pulling on 'his' shirt.
I finally got to see who was gonna be slaughtered.
It was little Yuki Kanno...
I could tell she was startled but she took on an expression of fear when she noticed I was smiling.
Before she had a chance to run away, I grabbed her by the arm, pulled her in and covered her mouth before she could scream.
I opened the door to look around inside the hallway.
Making sure nobody was in the halls as I was bringing her into the basement.
No one was in sight. I went about to find the entrance to the underground tunnels.
It didn't take long for me to find my way to the tunnel entrance.
I opened the door to see pure blackness.
Shikeishu:"Dammit, I can't see a thing, hmm I've gotten too spoiled by my dark-vision...oh well, not my body" I thought to myself.
I almost stumbled a few times when trying to walk down the stairs into the main tunnel.
After managing to get down the stairs,
Using one hand to carry Yuki through the tunnel while keeping the other hand over her mouth.
I could feel her tears running down to my hand.
I wandered in the darkness for ten minutes before seeing the light underneath the door to our burial sight.
I opened the door and stepped in just long enough to put Yuki down and tie her hands and legs.
I then ejected myself out of Yoshikazu's body.
As I was headed out the door to go outside and wait for the moment to call the police, I looked over to see the other victims.
It was Ryou Yoshizawa and Tokiko Tsuji tied up on the floor already.
I recognized them from Yoshikazu 's class.
I turned around and left the room grinning after seeing Sachiko holding a pair of scissor's coming after the first kill.
Halfway up the stairs, leaving the tunnels. I could already hear the blood curdling screams of the first victim.
I stayed by the entrance to the tunnels so I could listen for the last two screams. After the first one, there was a cold silence for a moment until I could hear the second one.
This scream didn't last as long as the first one.
It seamed like Sachiko must've enjoyed herself too much after killing the first two because there was an even longer pause before the final scream.
And before I knew it, the final scream began.
This scream however, was the most intense compared to the other ones.
The shrieks were so loud, it was like I was standing next to her, watching her getting torn to pieces.
... It was fascinating.
I had to break out of my trance to run outside to call for help.
I ran to the nearest pay phone and dialed for the police.
When help arrived, I faked some tears and pointed them to the underground tunnels, to where they would find the crime scene.
I wasn't allowed to go back into the school, so I waited until I saw the police bringing Yoshikazu out of the school, covering his face with a jacket.
Not too long after, Sachiko was being carried on a stretcher and Placed in an ambulance that had pulled up shortly after.
By the look on the police men's faces, ... she must've done something completely sadistic.
I watched the paramedic's close the doors to the ambulance.
For a second, I could see Sachiko sitting on the rolling bed, she was covered in blood.
When she looked at me before the doors closed, she smiled at me.
Shortly afterwards, the ambulance left the school grounds and the police had the coroners pick up the bodies.
One of the police officers offered me a ride back home, but I told him Shikeishu:"thank you, sir but I called my parents shortly after calling you, they should be on their way to pick me up"
As the police man was walking away, I thought to myself. Shikeishu:"I can't believe he bought that?... Idiot".
As the police were gearing up to leave the school as well.
I stood on the sidelines. Shikeishu:"hmm... I wonder if Sachi planned on getting carted off in an ambulance?" I smirked to myself.
Shikeishu:"I guess I'll be alone for a while" I remarked as I was walking back inside the school.
Shikeishu:"I have a feeling that this is a good way to get the ball rolling but I just don't feel that it's enough, so to really tear this place down... I need to get creative" I whispered as I disappeared into the school.
To be continued. Okay, now that that's out of the way. Criticize or whatever.(it's not gonna stop me from writing). Thanks for reading.(even though fic writing isn't my strong suit).
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February 11, 2014, 9:16 am
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Taking a shot in the dark with this one. I've decided to remain in third person view. But no need for explanation, I'll continue.
Spoiler: click to toggle Chapter three. Like Mother, Like Daughter. Shortly after the police departed the school premises.
He walked back into the school's main hallway and was headed towards the second floor.
As he entered the hallway leading to the staircase.
He heard something move in the infirmary.
Shikeishu:"I guess she has a problem with the way the new nurse has things arranged..." He sighed to himself.
As he approached the doorway to the infirmary.
He noticed the lights were on and she stopped rearranging the supplies.
Shikeishu:"So you couldn't help yourself, huh Ms Shinozaki?"He asked sarcastically when he entered the room.
Yoshie:"since when did you start developing an attitude towards me?" She said after turning around.
Shikeishu:"I'm sorry... I just couldn't help but notice you rearranging everything?" He remarked with his hands behind his back.
Yoshie:" well yes... I hate the way everything is set up... It's not organized at all!.." She said in frustration after looking around.
Yoshie:"I just hate that bitch... She thinks she can just replace me?" She screamed in anger.
The infirmary began shaking erratically as Ms Shinozaki became more furious.
Watching her thrash the infirmary. He began to lock himself in his mind.
"This happens every night" He thought to himself.
"I can't say I blame her for being angry" He noted.
"The day after we died. The principle had already started interviewing a new nurse" thinking back.
"When the teachers mourned for Ms Shinozaki... He would just shrugged it off and hide in his office" He reminisces.
"I think the part that made Ms Shinozaki the most livid was the fact that the principle denied every question pertaining to her death" he acknowledged.
"... Much less, where me and Sachi disappeared to..." He cringed while thinking.
"But this wasn't the first time she had an outburst like this" He remarked to himself.
"Ms Shinozaki has been forced to watch new nurses come and go through the infirmary for twenty years" He explained.
"Some nurses were laid off for missing to much work. Others would quit because they would feel uneasy inside of their infirmary." He remembered
"I heard there was one nurse who had to be sent to a psyche ward for claiming to have seen a woman break her own neck in the reflection of the mirror" He remembered.
"... She wasn't wrong" He smirked to himself.
"So for twenty years, it was like Ms Shinozaki was trapped in a cycle of pain" he mourned.
"There was nothing she could do but watch, get angry, write in her journal and repeat" he acknowledged.
"She told me once, about how she felt towards the principle after we died" he noted.
"That she didn't hate him for what he's done to her. ...She hated him because it seemed like her life meant nothing to him" he thought to himself
He broke out of train of thought to calm Yoshie down.
Shikeishu:"Wait, calm down, there's no need to cause an earthquake?... Right?" He shouted nervously.
Yoshie:"Why shouldn't I?!... It's all her fault, anyway?!" She shouted at him.
Shikeishu:"Okay I'm sorry but please calm down... What would Sachi think of your outburst?" He reasoned, trying to calm her down.
The room finally stopped shaking when Ms Shinozaki started calming down after mentioning Sachiko.
Yoshie:"Sa-Chan?..." She muttered to herself.
Yoshie:"Where is she?... Wasn't she with you?" She questioned after kneeling in front of him.
Shikeishu:"Don't worry, she went into an ambulance, she's safe... for the most part"He said in a low tone.
Yoshie:"For the most part? Is that all you can say?! That's my daughter we're talking about!?" She shouted frantically.
Yoshie:"My Sa-Chan is with complete strangers right now and you expect me to calm down!?" She screamed angrily.
The infirmary began shaking furiously, even more so than when she was angry towards the nurse.
Shikeishu:"It was her idea, not mine!" He shouted at her.
Shikeishu:"She came up with the plan for the teacher to be arrested!" He shouted angrily.
Yoshie:"What!" She screamed in confusion.
Ms Shinozaki paused and lowered her head to process what he said.
There was a harrowing silence when Ms Shinozaki had stopped her outburst.
To his surprise... She began laughing hysterically.
Her laughter gradually grew from the point to where she was so loud, you could feel it throughout the school.
He doesn't get scared easily but he became terrified... Even more frightened than when she was angry.
Yoshie:"Oh Sa-Chan..." She noted after laughing.
Yoshie:"I'm sorry... I just haven't laughed this hard since I was a little girl" She said after wiping her eye.
Yoshie:"Now... If you'll excuse me, I have some notes to write"She said while walking towards her old desk, still giggling.
Shikeishu:"Okay?... I guess I'll be leaving?" He questioned before exiting the infirmary.
Shikeishu:"hmm... Well I see who Sachi gets her mood swings from..."He thought to himself.
Shikeishu:"I'm guessing no one will be around for a while... So I best be prepared" he noted to himself before heading towards the third floor.
When the news got to the principle about the three counts of murders.
Principle Yanagihori ordered the school to be shut down so the students and teachers can have some peace of mind.
... And for him to deal with his grief.
He refused to believe in the idea of his son murdering three of his students.
In fact, as soon as everyone left the school grounds, he began covering his office door with talisman's to ward off evil spirits.
... It's like he knew.
By this time, Sachiko had returned to the school grounds at seven pm.
They met up with each other in the main entrance.
When she returned, it was like she was practically a different person.
Not only did her demeanor change, but her entire personality went through a metamorphoses.
She acted strange before but after the last event... He almost didn't even recognize her.
... Perhaps tasting blood for the first time had a profound effect on her sanity.
Shikeishu:"Hey umm Sachi?, how's it been?"He asked after greeting her.
Sachiko:"I've been great"She spoke with delight.
Shikeishu:"That's good to hear... Also, half of the students didn't return from their two week break. "He explained.
Sachiko:"hmm... Good but the school still seems to be stable"She pointed out.
Shikeishu:"I figured this would only be a start for us anyway... You can't kill it's career that easily"He noted to her.
Sachiko:"It looks like we're gonna have to take drastic measures if we're going to have our revenge"She explained while rubbing her chin.
Shikeishu:"So did you come up with any plans while you were away?"He questioned bluntly.
Sachiko:"Hmm..." She thought for a moment. Sachiko:"I know, let's play a game!"She shouted after snapping her fingers.
Shikeishu:"Uh okay?... What kind of game?"He asked in confusion.
Sachiko:"We're gonna see who gets a bigger body count!"She spoke in glee.
Sachiko:"And the best part is... Use whatever means necessary... anything go's"She explained with a grin.
Shikeishu:"Anything go's huh?... Okay I'm game"He agreed.
Shikeishu:"So when do we start?" He asked with his palms closed together.
Sachiko:"Whenever you see fit"She explained after pulling out her pair of scissors.
Shikeishu:"Good with me... I'm gonna find a weapon". He said just before walking out of the double doors and into the main hallway when he turned towards her.
Shikeishu:"Hey Sachi... You should probably say hi your mother" He said to her just when she was leaving the room, as well.
Sachiko:"Who?... Oh, right... I'll go and... Whatever" She said, half listening.
Shikeishu:"I guess I'll start off small... No need to rush" He muttered to himself as he went looking for a knife.
To be continued.
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"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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March 10, 2014, 2:52 pm
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Alright, since I think the last one ended on a low note. I'm adding an extension to it. This one takes place during the same night.
So here you go.
Spoiler: click to toggle Chapter Three Extension. After meeting up with Sachi, he headed north from the main entrance to find a weapon to use for this game she came up with.
As he was searching for the cafeteria to find a knife, he passed in front of his old locker, to which now has a new name tag on the door.
He stood there for a moment thinking about everything he had stored into his locker, the only thing he saved from his locker after his death was his notebook.
Shikeishu:"Hmm... I often times forget its been twenty years since I used this locker..." He reminisces.
Shikeishu:"Maybe I should flip through my book sometime after finding a knife or something... For old times sake..." He noted to himself with a sigh.
As he continued his way to the cafeteria, he reached his destination, out of curiosity, he tried pulling on the door just to find out its locked.
Shikeishu:"Why is this door locked when every other door in this school is always open?... Fat ass is probably scared to death, somebody might find his 'Sacred Meatloaf' or something?" He smirked to himself as he passed through the door.
He went straight to the kitchen,without regard of the thought of anyone having to clean up his mess, he began thrashing the kitchen until he came across a particular knife that was kept in a glass case.
Shikeishu:"Oh, shiny!" He squealed with glee as he held the case, just as he was about to break it when he stopped himself.
Shikeishu:"I don't know... This is a very pretty case for such a pretty knife... It would be a shame to toss it aside like a piece of trash?" He acknowledged as he put the case underneath his arm and went about his business.
Looking back into the kitchen he just destroyed, he thought to himself with a smirk.
Shikeishu:"F*** them!... They can clean it!" He laughed to himself.
After receiving his weapon, he left the cafeteria and headed towards the bomb shelter entrance to see that it's covered by several different kinds of protective charms.
Shikeishu:"When did he have the time to do this?" He questioned as he placed his hand on the door only to pull his hand back when one of the charms burned his hand.
Shikeishu:"Ouch! That seriously hurt!... I didn't think these things actually worked?" He noted in response to the pain.
Shikeishu:"Oh well... He didn't think of me passing through the floor, however" he remarked as he sank into the floor and into the tunnel.
He wandered into the tunnel for five hundred feet when he heard a creaking noise coming from the room leading to the burial site.
When he passed through the door, he's surprised by the sight of Sachiko pushing and pulling on a corpse that's been strung up on a noose.
Shikeishu:"I-Is that the principle's son?" He asked in a surprised manner.
Sachiko:"Yep!" She said happily.
Shikeishu:"ugh, he stinks!... How long has he been down here?" He asked as he covered his nose.
Sachiko:"You tell me... I've been out of the school for two weeks, remember?" She points out while pushing on the dead body.
Shikeishu:"I hadn't even noticed?... Maybe he snuck in..." He questioned.
Shikeishu:"And by the way, I've never seen a perfect hang men's before?..." He acknowledged as he stared at the rope.
Shikeishu:"I've always been fascinated by this knot in particular... I wish he could've taught me how to do that before he croaked" He said in a disappointed tone.
Sachiko:"... Hold back your tears, 'boy scout'..." She said in a mocking tone.
Shikeishu:"Im not a Boy Scout!... My dad's a fishermen" He pointed out defensively.
Sachiko:"Just save your little story" She said in a condescending manner.
Sachiko:"Besides, we're going to see him again" She said in an enlightening tone.
Shikeishu:"What do you mean?... Do you mean he'll come back like us?" He asked, slightly confused.
Sachiko:"No... Worse" She spoke in a sinister tone.
Shikeishu:"You know?... For a little girl, you sure have a lot of evil plans?... Did you plan for us to die as well?" He said sarcastically.
Sachiko:"What's that supposed to mean?" She questioned with her hands on her hips.
Shikeishu:"Nothing, never mind... I'm going find my book" He said as he was headed into the burial site.
Sachiko:"Wait, don't you wanna hear what I'm planning for dunderhead?" She asked as he was passing through the door.
Shikeishu:"No thanks... I'll let you have your plans... I'm going to prepare for tomorrow" He said as he passed through the door and into the room before the burial site.
After entering the burial site, he finds his note book wrapped in burlap underneath his decayed remains.
He unwraps his book and begins writing down some thoughts of future events.
Shikeishu:"Boy Scout huh?... Don't worry... You'll get yours..." He muttered to himself as he writes into his book.
To be continued. Writer's notes. I wrote this down today. Once again, do whatever you will with this.
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"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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March 11, 2014, 1:11 pm
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The First Victim
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Okay, here's another chapter for you. This one takes place the very next day from the last one and I've gotta say. I didn't think I could write like this. I hope you guys enjoy it. Writer's note. Every other characters excluding the main protagonist and Sachi are nameless. (Mainly due to me not being creative enough to come up with names for the extras).
Spoiler: click to toggle Chapter four. The Taste Of Blood.
As morning arrived.
The students and teachers returned to their normal routine with the exception of each student required to have a guardian follow them when they would walk in between classrooms.
Since the night of the murders and the unexpected suicide of Yoshikazu, two nights after.
The school's reputation would slowly drown in blood,
The principle himself takes full responsibility for these atrocities and prays to not let anyone else endure this torment.
Unfortunately for him... The torment is only beginning.
Shikeishu:"So... It's a brand new day, it appears almost everyone has returned to school" He stated as he and Sachiko examined the school hallways from the shadows.
Sachiko:"It appears so... So did you come up with any plans on how to get your first kill?" She questioned as she's feeling for her scissors.
Shikeishu:"I've had one plan... It's kinda like how I got 'dunderhead' to catch the first one" He explained as he's looking around.
Sachiko:"So your just going to do the same thing?... That's not very creative?" She asked somewhat unimpressed.
Shikeishu:"Hey!, it worked, didn't it?" He spoke defensively.
Shikeishu:"And besides... I have a plan set up for the first kill anyway... You'll see" He said as he saw her shrug with a sigh.
Sachiko:"Whatever... Just don't let it get old, okay" She said with a somewhat sarcastic tone.
Shikeishu:"Don't worry about me... You do what you have to do and I'll do what I have to do" he said as he began to stalk through the crowd from the shadows.
He passed through a number of potential targets when he came across a teacher talking to a little girl in a corner of the hallway.
The little girl was sitting on the ground, crying for an unknown reason.
The man was kneeling down in front of her, trying to calm her down.
Shikeishu:"hmm... This should be easy..." He thought to himself as he watched the two talk to each other.
The school bell began ringing, notifying the students and teachers to return to the classrooms.
The man stood up and held his hand out to help the little girl up from the ground.
They were the last two, far behind the crowd of people in the hallway.
Which made his job easier in a way.
Shikeishu:"Well it's now or never" he said to himself as he charged towards the man and entered his body.
As he began possessing the man, he felt him grab his own head, instead of letting him scream and give away his plan, he used what control he did have to grab the man's mouth to silence him.
Little Girl:"Sensei!?, are you alright?!" She asked frantically as she began to cry again.
He gained full control of the teacher and quickly grabbed her mouth to quiet her down.
Shikeishu:"Shh... It's okay... I'm fine now..." He said in a comforting tone to calm her down.
Little Girl:"B-But Sensei?... You were just uh..." She stuttered while trying to calm down.
Shikeishu:"It's okay, don't cry... Lets just go back to class, okay?" He said with a smile on his face.
Little Girl:" O-Okay Sensei..." She spoke in a low manner as she held his hand.
He walked with her to the end of the hall, passing up the classrooms and was headed towards the science lab.
Little Girl:"Umm Sensei? We passed up the classroom?" She questioned as he just kept walking.
They kept walking down the hallway until they stopped in front of the science lab, to which was vacant.
Little Girl:"It's not time for this class yet, Sensei, remember?" She asked as he opened the door to the lab.
Shikeishu:"Trust me... It's time" He spoke in a cold manner as he pulled her in the lab with him.
Little Girl:"Ouch, Sensei that hurt!" She whined as he pulled her in the middle of the room, next to a table.
Shikeishu:"Don't worry... The pain won't last... Now... Get on the table" He spoke in a dark tone of voice.
Little Girl:"Wh-What, Sensei?" She asked in confusion.
Without second thought, he grabs her by the arms and throws her onto the table and begins binding her with stray ropes he had stored in the lab from the night before.
Little Girl:"S-Sensei? What are you doing?" She asked as he's tying her to the table.
Shikeishu:"Quiet down... It'll all be over soon..." He spoke with a grin growing on his face.
After tying her up, he kneeled in front of the table to pull out his knife he had stolen from the cafeteria.
Little Girl:"Wh-What are you doing with that knife?!" She shouted as he stood there, admiring the edge and shine to the blade.
Without speaking a single word, he turned towards her and began slowly grazing the blade across her belly.
A line of blood appeared across her belly where he passed the blade without any pressure.
She immediately began screaming and crying when the blade made contact with her skin.
Little Girl:"W-Why are you doing this?!" She pleaded with tears in her eyes.
She began screaming again when he pushed the knife across her belly for the second time in an 'X' motion with deeper cuts.
Blood was leaking in high doses this time when he went to grab her mouth to silence her.
He stopped himself from silencing her when he muttered to himself.
Shikeishu:"No... I want them to find me... And I'll give them a sight they'll never forget" He spoke with a grin permanently drawn on his face.
He gripped the knife tighter as he began making slow incisions into her stomach, exposing vital organs.
Her screams were deafening beyond this point as she's still conscious through this 'operation'.
He never realized how grotesque the human anatomy was until he started ripping apart a living subject.
Before he knew it, the screaming subsided as she slipped into unconsciousness due to severe blood loss.
He then hears a crowd of voices behind him.
Man:"What have you done?!" The man shouted in panic as he bears witness to a horrific scene of a teacher tearing a student apart.
The man, along with the rest of the crowd are mortified by the sight of a man, covered in blood with a knife in his hand.
There was thick puddles of blood covering the floor from when it leaked from his victim's dissection.
He turns around to face the crowd of teachers and students alike, faces filled with tears and rage.
One of their own staff had torn his own students to pieces and he stared them down with a demented smile on his face.
... They thought the nightmare was over but it just became worse than they can ever imagine.
Shikeishu:"Ah... Your just in time for the show!" He shouted as he began reaching the knife towards his own neck.
One of the teachers tried to grab him but ended up running into him, pushing the knife into the culprit's neck.
Out of reaction, Shikeishu then ejected from the 'culprit's body, quickly pulling out the knife without being seen and sank into the floor and appeared into the tunnel.
Shikeishu's puppet grabbed his own neck out of reflex due to the severe pain he's enduring as he's bleeding to death.
He turned his head towards the crowd and his puppet one more time before sinking into the ground... Laughing as he disappeared.
As he landed on the ground of the tunnel, he took a moment to stare into the blood soaked blade's reflection to see his smile hadn't disappeared from his face.
Shikeishu:"Well that was..." He was interrupted by the sound of slow clapping.
He turned around to see Sachiko standing in the darkness.
Sachiko:"We'll done, Hisan... You did well for your first time... I'm impressed" She said with a long smile on her face.
Shikeishu:"Thank you...honestly, I didn't think I could pull it off" He said with a somewhat surprised tone.
Sachiko:"I've gotta say, I didn't think you had it in you... You were always too shy to take initiative" She said with praise.
Shikeishu:"I know... I was hesitant at first but somehow I let go of my consciousness and somehow... it just flowed" he remarked.
Sachiko:"Good... You don't need a conscious anyway... It'll only get in your way" She explained as she pulled out her blood coated scissors.
Sachiko:"So... How did it feel?... How did it feel tasting blood?" She asked in a sinister tone.
Shikeishu:"It felt amazing" He spoke in a sinister tone as well.
He then started licking the blood off of the blade.
This was another step towards the downfall of the school known as Heavenly Host Elementary.
They've made their mark for the day but the game was only just beginning.
... They felt it was time to savor this stepping stone.
To be continued.
If anyone is wondering if I plan my stories out, I do not. Everything is improvised... Honestly, I actually like this one.
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"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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Yoshie Shinozaki
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March 14, 2014, 6:13 pm
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The First Victim
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Okay, I wrote a short one and this time. This does not include my custom character but instead. This one's protagonist is none other than Yoshie Shinozaki. Her story takes place three months before she died.
So without further adieu...
Spoiler: click to toggle Sachiko's birthday. Part one.
July 18th: 1953.
It was seven pm when the nurse of Heavenly Host Elementary was finishing her rounds in the infirmary.
She would glance at the calendar on the wall, over and over, reminding herself what the next was going to be.
... For it was Sachiko Shinozaki's seventh birthday tomorrow.
She stopped to take a seat at her desk because she was feeling dizzy from stressing over her daughter's birthday.
All this time has passed and she didn't think of anything to do with her daughter.
Due to dizziness, she lowered her head onto her desk to try to keep the room from spinning around like a merry go round.
She practically fell asleep at her desk when Principle Takamine Yanagihori knocked on the door.
She sprung up in a daze when she heard the knocking on the door.
She somewhat muttered the lines "come in" but she was still drowsy from mental exhaustion.
Principle Yanagihori walked into the infirmary to talk to the stressed out nurse.
Takamine:"Shinozaki?" He spoke as he entered the infirmary.
Yoshie:"Oh uh... Principle Yanagihori?... Is something wrong?" She asked as she was startled by him entering the room.
Takamine:"I was just about to asked you the same thing?" He asked with concern in his voice.
Yoshie:"S-Sorry Principle... It's just I'm trying to plan an event for my daughter's birthday tomorrow... But I can't think of anything" She said while practically pulling out her hair.
Takamine:"You shouldn't have to stress over this too much... You're going to have a panic attack if you keep this up?" He explained with concern.
Yoshie:"B-But it's Sa-Chan's birthday tomorrow and I didn't even get her anything to surprise her with" She said with disappointment.
Yoshie:"... And I know I can't afford much of anything and I'm just going to upset her like I did, last year!" She said as she started panicking .
Takamine:"Hold on Shinozaki! Calm down!... I think I have an idea?" He said while trying to calm her down.
Yoshie:"Hmm?" She wondered as she listen to what he had to say.
Takamine:"How about this... Why don't you take a vacation and go some place nice for you and your daughter?... Get away for a while?" He asked her as she looked at him with enlightenment.
Yoshie:"R-Really?... Th-Thank you Principle!" She said in an excited tone.
Takamine:"Don't mention it... It's your daughter's birthday after all... Have fun and don't worry so much, okay?" He said as he was leaving the infirmary.
Yoshie:"Yes Principle... But what about the infirmary?" She asked after thinking of the infirmary being vacant.
Takamine:"You leave that to me... Just relax, okay?" He said after turning around one more time before leaving.
The nurse was left alone to plan her and Sachiko's vacation.
She sat back down into her chair when a thought came to mind.
Yoshie:"That gives me an idea... I think we can go to a hiking trail I walked when I was younger" She said while rubbing her chin.
Yoshie:"It's simple and less expensive... But I don't care about prices anyway" She said while writing into her journal.
Yoshie:"I'd buy her the sun and the moon if it makes my Sa-Chan happy" She said happily while thinking of Sachiko. Alright, I'm gonna try to continue this story for now. And honestly, I've been wanting to write something about Yoshie and Sachiko that wasn't either disturbing or depressing. So I hope you enjoyed this and I'm gonna try to write the second part to be longer.
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"I Return This Nightmare. I Will Find You. Sleepless, Cloaked In Despair. I'm Behind You. Man Has Made Me Oh So Strong. Blurring Lines Of Right And Wrong. Far Too Late For Frail Amends. Now It's Come To Sweet Revenge. Desperate Hands That Lose Control. Have No Mercy On Your Soul."- Here Comes Revenge By Metallica.
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